My original in Tamil
அருவி
ஆர்ப்பரித்தே அருவி விழுந்தாலும்
அதனுள்ளும் ஒரு அமைதி இருக்கும்
அருகில் சென்றால் நீர்த் துளிகள் தெளித்து
நம்மில் இன்னும் இன்பம் பெருக்கும்
துணிந்து சென்று நீராடும் போது
மேனிக்கு நல்ல சுகம் கொடுக்கும்
அதன்பின் அருவி நதியாக மாறி
அமைதியாக மெல்ல ஓடும்
இறுதியில் இயற்கை தன்னிடம் உள்ள
அமைதியை நமக்கு சொல்லிக் கொடுக்கும்
ஆனால் நம் வாழ்வில் உள்ள
ஆரவாரம் அனைத்தையும் நினைக்க
இயற்கையோடு ஒன்றிக் கலந்து
அந்த அமைதி காண மனதும் துடிக்கும்
குருகுலம், 30-6-2024, மாலை 5.00
My own English Translation.
Here is the corrected version of your translation:
Waterfall
Though the waterfall falls with a roaring sound,
Still, there will remain a gentle silence.
If we go close to it,
It will give joy by sprinkling water drops on us.
If we dare to go inside and take a bath,
It will give some healing comfort to our body.
Then, turning into a gentle river,
It will flow silently on its way.
In this way, nature will teach us
The silence that it holds within.
But when we think about
All the uproars in our life,
We will long to live with that kind of peace
By mingling with nature.
Gurukulam, 30-6-2024, 5.00
Then I asked two different kinds of platforms to translate my original in Tamil both in English and Hindi. But they gave different kinds of versions. As I like the one that I use in my Laptop the another one I will below which my Android phone created and translated.
Waterfall [translated by AI in my Laptop]
Though the waterfall cascades with a roar,
Within it lies a tranquil core.
When you approach, water sprays,
Enhancing our joy in many ways.
When you boldly swim in its embrace,
It brings your body a soothing grace.
Then the waterfall turns into a river,
Flowing gently, softly whispering ever.
In the end, nature shares its serene repose,
Teaching us the calm it knows.
But thinking of all the chaos in our lives,
We yearn to blend with nature’s vibes,
To find that peace our hearts do strive.
GURUKULAM, 30-6-2024, 5.00 PM
Water Fall [by AI done in Android phone. This is the poetic version of its article on Water fall that I have shared in notes 1 in Part One.]
A waterfall’s symphony, nature’s grand display,
Water cascades, in graceful array.
Sparkling drops in sunlight, rainbows in the mist,
Rhythmic roar of waters, by nature’s hand kissed.
Leaves rustle softly, birds chirp in song,
Creating a haven where hearts can belong.
Lush green surrounds, with wildflowers bright,
Enhancing the scene, a pure, vibrant sight.
Water descends, carving pools below,
Reflecting the sky in a gentle glow.
An escape so refreshing, nature’s own art,
Connecting the earth to the wanderer’s heart.
My original in Tamil
அருவி
ஆர்ப்பரித்தே அருவி விழுந்தாலும்
அதனுள்ளும் ஒரு அமைதி இருக்கும்
அருகில் சென்றால் நீர்த் துளிகள் தெளித்து
நம்மில் இன்னும் இன்பம் பெருக்கும்
துணிந்து சென்று நீராடும் போது
மேனிக்கு நல்ல சுகம் கொடுக்கும்
அதன்பின் அருவி நதியாக மாறி
அமைதியாக மெல்ல ஓடும்
இறுதியில் இயற்கை தன்னிடம் உள்ள
அமைதியை நமக்கு சொல்லிக் கொடுக்கும்
ஆனால் நம் வாழ்வில் உள்ள
ஆரவாரம் அனைத்தையும் நினைக்க
இயற்கையோடு ஒன்றிக் கலந்து
அந்த அமைதி காண மனதும் துடிக்கும்
குருகுலம், 30-6-2024, மாலை 5.00
My own English Translation.
Here is the corrected version of your translation:
Waterfall
Though the waterfall falls with a roaring sound,
Still, there will remain a gentle silence.
If we go close to it,
It will give joy by sprinkling water drops on us.
If we dare to go inside and take a bath,
It will give some healing comfort to our body.
Then, turning into a gentle river,
It will flow silently on its way.
In this way, nature will teach us
The silence that it holds within.
But when we think about
All the uproars in our life,
We will long to live with that kind of peace
By mingling with nature.
Gurukulam, 30-6-2024, 5.00
Then I asked two different kinds of platforms to translate my original in Tamil both in English and Hindi. But they gave different kinds of versions. As I like the one that I use in my Laptop the another one I will below which my Android phone created and translated.
Waterfall [translated by AI in my Laptop]
Though the waterfall cascades with a roar,
Within it lies a tranquil core.
When you approach, water sprays,
Enhancing our joy in many ways.
When you boldly swim in its embrace,
It brings your body a soothing grace.
Then the waterfall turns into a river,
Flowing gently, softly whispering ever.
In the end, nature shares its serene repose,
Teaching us the calm it knows.
But thinking of all the chaos in our lives,
We yearn to blend with nature’s vibes,
To find that peace our hearts do strive.
GURUKULAM, 30-6-2024, 5.00 PM
Water Fall [by AI done in Android phone. This is the poetic version of its article on Water fall that I have shared in notes 1 in Part One.]
A waterfall’s symphony, nature’s grand display,
Water cascades, in graceful array.
Sparkling drops in sunlight, rainbows in the mist,
Rhythmic roar of waters, by nature’s hand kissed.
Leaves rustle softly, birds chirp in song,
Creating a haven where hearts can belong.
Lush green surrounds, with wildflowers bright,
Enhancing the scene, a pure, vibrant sight.
Water descends, carving pools below,
Reflecting the sky in a gentle glow.
An escape so refreshing, nature’s own art,
Connecting the earth to the wanderer’s heart.
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